Comments : Steps

  • 17 years ago

    by kelsey

    Its like the other one... weird and still doesnt flow

  • 17 years ago

    by kelsey

    Why do u repeat the first line again and the second one?
    plz comment mine i wanna hear what ppl think!
    -kels

  • 17 years ago

    by kelsey

    That type of poem is weird.
    you know
    the repeat-ish type