"Life is like a dream that was meant for me.
It is a dream that only I can see.
Life is like a dream that gives and takes.
It is a dream about the choices that I make.'

I love this part.

This is a lovely written, inspirational piece.worthwhile read for sure.

I think that this poem is a beautiful write, something sincerely written for someone who means alot to you. Very nicely written. =] Keep it up. 5/5

Lovely :)
i no exactly how that is.

That's so sweet! I really loved this poem!

Oh, and thanks form your tips on my poem. I editted it, check it out when you got a sec!

I really liked this, the flow was good and the imagery excellent, and i particularly like the inspiring meaning behind it.

Great poem..one thing, i dont understand "when I'm down in out i" in the first stanza. double check that to make sure its not an error. 5/5

An inspirations written, beautiful with every stanza yet flowed with good message! something beautiful....