Comments : Moment's still.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Nice to hear a new poem from you. I enjoyed this one. Good job! Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by Kimmaly

    Amazing...........your writing it touch me. The words they speak, its wonderful. The words are full of life and emotions. You are my inspiration.
    -Kimmaly

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    As poer usual always beautifully written. great job very touching darl xx

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Aww that was so sweet yet so sad. It's a shame that this poem had to stop, because I could have continued reading it for hours.
    So beautifully written, a very enjoyable read, full of emotions.. Well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Love it, every word in every lines are just lovely.
    Ive read this a couple of times.
    Superb!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    There are moments when I'm lost
    When your face I can't recall
    When the fear of losing you
    Is the greatest fear of all.
    ^^ I Loved that stanza. I can relate to it so much and the flow and rhythm of it was perfect. I loved the whole poem. Each and every stanza captured all of your emotions and expressed them very deeply. 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Minkus

    I greatly enjoyed the final two lines; they really did it for me. Another good poem, another 5/5. You're good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    AWW! I love reading your poetry. Your poems are always so full of emotion, and they're always beautifully written. I've already told you how amazing I think you are to me, and whenever I read one of your poems you always prove me right. 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem here, you r very talented.....5/5