Comments : I'm Just A Poor Cinderella

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Aww what a sad poem, but very well written, there are 2 corrections that need to be made from what I can see.. Hope ya don't mind me pointing them out :]
    The last line in the first stanza, I think that should be 'live' not 'life'
    and the 2nd line in the second stanza I think should be 'is' not 'us.. I could be wrong though.. It does happen lol

    Well done on another excellent poem :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Adriana

    WOW!!! wut can i say u have a gift gurl fo realz

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow..great poem...it describes perfectly how people feel after a break up...i loved reading it...5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by s.u.r.r.e.n.d.e.r

    Awww that was soo cute.... i really liked it.
    and totally could relate to that feeling.
    good job that was really good =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this...
    So beautifully written, flawless flow, and filled with so much depth.
    This was just..wow.
    I thought it had a lot of power, and it's one that I will be reading over and over.