Ya know this is kinda cool..i don't like Good Charlotte anymore but i use to and it's just really kinda cool. i like how it all flows together...good job

Great hun!
5/5

Very creative. i love it. great job.

jamie

I like this poem as well, as always you have showed ur great talent, 5/5

This is insprirational not that sad to me

Genius! Your idea worked, and it was a very creative one! how wonderful, I never would have thought of that.

Great poem keep up the good work:)
5/5

Your poem is ok, I t doesn't flow very well though. 4

I loved this, especially how you made it from song titles, I thought that was very inventive.
My favourite part was how you ended it, it shows that there is always hope.