Very nice poem. Though I don't personally believe in God. I still liked this poem very much.

There was a wonderful meaning to it, with a nice smooth flow. Rhyming was also great. And the ending really brought the poem together! Keep it up!!

Natalie``

This is very nice . I liked this a lot .
The rhyming was nice, and it had a great flow to it .
Keep it upp .
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Aww really cute. The punctuation was good, try adding a couple commas though. Great write.

Hmmm very beautiful more and the last line... 5/5 keep it up