This made me go all 'awwww' !

Very creative. Although the rhythm is a little patchy. Otherwise .. FAB job =]

Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

This was interesting, I wish it would have been a little longer though

I really enjoyed this one too..it is aother one that takes you away..you have a great talent

Excellent

Woohoo awesome poem lol short and sweet great poem nice flow also great job:D

keenan
ps thanks for the comment lmao