This poem is beyond anyone whom has read it and scored it anything less that EXCELLENT!!

My motivation for writing it was beyond anything I have ever felt. Thank you for your comment Rachelle. It means alot

Paradoxical and moving. Sad that some may not see the beauty in such a short piece, losing themselves in the inner twists. Great job.

The deep meaning behind your words gives this short piece so much impact.

Looking forward to reading of your poetry.
Take care, Luanne

Hi Tyrone, if you click on disscusions, right beneath poetry club on the center right hand side of your page it will take you into the club

Glad to have you join us !

I love it tyrone

Hey sweetie thanks for the comments hope to talk to u again
aim me if u can i will be in the chatroom

I WROTE A NEW POEM HOPE U LIKE IT

I SEE U DONT WANNA TALK TO ME SO TAKE CARE OK BYE

Oooohhh...i like! Im glad you told me to read this one!

Only a true heart can be filled with such words, wish it was longer thou..