This was a very sad poem. But beautifuly written. You're mastering this style, and I love it! Keep it up!

Natalie``

Ooooo its been awhile since I read a good Pleiades poem.I think sad or dark poems for a Pleiades poem is the hardest to write. Very good job 5/5

Very unique write. I really liked it. Please look at the poems and rate them and comment them because of you and My worse fear it would mean alot. 5/5

Taylor

Aww this was so sad, but very well written once again. You have a wide range of poetry talent.. I'm impressed :] 5/5 xx

Very nice..short but detailed...keep it up, thx for ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore