Comments : My goodbye

  • 17 years ago

    by Eddie

    Powerful words to say to ther person u love the most.... but I feel you cause I just went through the same four months ago, I never thought I'd get over this one chick but I did and I'm happy, if i could do it so can u.

  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    Wow, soo feeling this piece
    it's obvious it means a lot and the emotion is deep and so easy for me to relate to, i've been there i know how it feels and i hope it will get better tbh
    anyways, really good poem, keep it all up
    5/5
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Loved the poem
    especially the bit about the one last breath
    truly beautiful poem
    xx