Hey I loved this poem but there were a lot of errors so I thought it would be better if I corrected it for you and posted it for you to determine if you wanna change it to this. Just trying to help :)

Why does love hurt so much?
Why is pain inside hard and awful?
Why do I need to feel like
Everything goes so wrong
And I'm gonna go insane!

Why didn't he feel
That my love was for real!
Why'd he keep on thinking
That I'm cheating on him
And I'm with someone else

I really love him so much
But he didn't seem to care!
I dont think he understands
How much I need him there
I'm so lost w/out him and confused

I thought I found the one,
I thought this love was true,
I thought I was in love
And no one can compare!
but it ended really badly

I always ask myself
Does he really love me?
Does he really care about me?
Is he really happy w/me?
Maybe it was a lie,
Or maybe it was true!

I wish that he could tell me
Coz I'm only thinking of him
And my heart beats only for him
My love for him is so true
And forever will be true!

Should I let him go?
Should I say..bye to him?
And this is the end of everything?
Or, should I wait to heal the wounds
And begin from the start!

I wish he was here w/me,
I wish i could touch him,
I wish he could see me,
I wish he could feel what i feel right now,
That's why he knows how my HEART, is...

Hurting inside!

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Ok, well, I left some slang in there even though it was tempting to edit it.. haha I tend to have OCD with grammar. sorry. I hope my editing was helpful. Thanks for your comment. :D 5/5

Good, lots of feeling... but there was a lot of spelling errors, just go back and look through it.

It looks like you put a lot of feeling into this poem, i liked it a lot, keep writing

I could tell this was very heartfelt, but I felt like it might have been too direct; good poetry on love is so hard to write because it's been written about so much, so a lot of it seems unoriginal or cliche. This forces people that want to write excellent, creative poetry about love to figure out some metaphor for it so it comes across as something new. Still, it was well expressed, so I gave it a 4/5. Good job.

I could feel the urge in this one, just to have him back & i believe that if love is true from both ends.....nothing can come in between..so have patience

God Bless You
Nicely Written
all the best and take care

The poem itself is sad, but beautiful. But you have made a lot of errors that you may want to correct. For instance you left out a lot of words that made it hard for me to follow and it also threw off the flow of the poem. I'll give you an example. This is your first stanza:

Why does love hurt so much?
Why pain inside is hard and awful?
Why I need to feel like
Everything goes so wrong
And I'm gonna go insane!

You should have wrote:

Why does love hurt so much?
Why is the pain inside so hard and awful?
Why do I feel like
everything is going wrong
and I'm going insane?

I may have not formatted it right, but I'm sure you understand what I am saying about the missing words.

But the whole concept of the poem was wonderful and I think you done a wonderful job on it. But if I were you I would fix those errors. I give you a 5/5 because this did come from your heart and I know what heartache feels like. Just keep up the good work and remember to fill in the missing words and this poem will be perfect.

Letty

"Is he really love me?
Is he really care about me?"

the first two lines should start with Does not Is I would believe to make since because it was kinda hard to read it with Is instead of Does.

also
"Coz I'm only think of him"
should be thinking of him not think of him.

but other then that you did an amazing job && it does suck having someone think that you are the one to cheat && you can say so many words but words don't solve much but i really hope he does understand now && that's how my boyfriend is acting lately so i don't know.. but thanks for sharing this poem. Your very talented.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.

I liked this, although I noticed a lot of spelling errors such as the 'is he love me' should be Does he love me, which kind of kept throwing me off.
But apart from the grammar errors, I could see that a lot of emotion went into this, which is why I continued to read.

Hm.
I'm sorry that he hurt your feelings, but I just didn't feel it in the poem. I didn't get the emotions throughout the poem, and it was rather cliche. =/ Sorry.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Very touching, it sounds like it is written straight from the heart, like all those raw thoughts and emotions that go through our heads when we are in great pain. This is filled with feelings from the beginning to the end.
Great job!

That was very heartbreaking.. ilove those lines very touching piece 5/5