YAY this is the first haiku I have read ever in this website! YAYAYAYAY! lol I give you 5/5 because as simple as it looks haiku's are kinda hard. I have written some before but I dont have any posted. I have thought about putting them on but I probably will stick to regular poems lol :D Great job!

Hi Letty

Good to see you scribbling a haiku
Well done for a first haiku.
keep them coming..

"I'm trying something different."

-yep and thats the right way to get better and better, experiment on new forms of poetry, youll be surprise what your talent can give you.
Just believe in your self.

Misstress.

Great job! I love it. 5/5 it's good that your trying something different too

Haiku's are my favourite type of nature poem, they are hard to write and i have written a few myself.
this one was absolutely awesome, a real treasure, keep writing.
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Unique style penned, though simply, but you know how to write something different!...marvellous!

Letty,
Your syllable count is perfect, wording is perfect ....I have to say the entire piece is just perfect.

And yes, I have to say a Haiku appears to look easily done but it can sometimes take longer to write than a 4 stanza poem. 3 little lines and a total of 17 syllables can sometimes take forever to create....

Very enjoyable read Letty !
Take care, Luanne