Aww the sweet bitter taste that love can bring, we know it only too well.. Another excellent poem.. Well done 5/5 xx

Good poem, and it really not good to give in to all temptations...GP

Great poem..this shows brilliance in you! Honestly...Now I want to make one..hmm 5/5

This is another great job by you, and thank you very much for your kind support of other members in the site, without ppl like you there s no reason to be here and try to write new staff, i really want to say i do appriciate your kindness.....5/5

Great! I didn't know what to expect at first, but once you ended it in a clear understandable way.

This is brilliant i luv how u used another style of poetry in which less talented people lyk me cant do as good as normal lol if that makes sense
it was great