I know the ending wasn't all that good. I actually thought that the first stanza was the best.

This poem is so sad, but the ending is beauiful. great poem i loved it. it's really good. shanik

The last three stanza's where absoloutly amazing!!! I can't believe it its such a deep and sad story. It really makes you think about life and what your going through like how much you feel pain but others can feel it much worse!! Once again an amazing poem ^^ xxx Much love from Roxy