I really like your poem it's so different. great work. shanik

Great poem, I especially liked this stanza:

Love is a mere dream,
You feel it every night in your sleep,
It hurts so much it makes you scream,
Sometimes it even makes you weep.

but I think if you remove the word 'even' it would improve the flow a lot. Great poem! 5/5.

Wow ur poem is mad good, has lotz of emotion, itz jusy great 5/5

That is an awesome poem!! its so real
good job!

That is an awesome poem!! its so real
good job!