Really good this one and i am not just saying. has a good flow and is really emotive.

you are on my fav list too!!

When the strongest of the strong falls one must step up and take thier place...in some cases... this poem scared me because it made me think about how i am always helping pplz out and when i hit bottom all i got iz really my self :( but it has never came 2 me leaving....your poem showed how our lives have came 2 be... how fake ppl really are, or how they can hide what is really going on... 5/5 keep it up u :)
peace
anthony

Not the kind of poems I would usually read, but as you'd commented on my poem, I felt obliged. Needless to say, I did like this poem. My favorite part was 'We ...'. I'm going to give this poem a 4/5, and for someone whom usually doesn't like poems which don't rhyme, nor have a specific structure, that's very, very good.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for commenting on my poem 'The Gods gave me a Gift, stronger than Love'.

P.P.S. Even though you only writ a two-worded comment, I felt I should read this, lol.

This is a really deep poem...o ya hun i havent written much poems cause i have been feeling ill and down:(
zozo

It is, after all, ourselves we must learn to trust.....our work, much like the cookies, is cut out for us......We Strive to be worthy of our own trust....a worthy pursuit.....and please cry all you want..washes and humbles the Soul.....a fine fresh start every time.....My heart goes out to you in your confusion over your friend......he Can still hear you...Tell him you forgive him..it will reduce his suffering...This is a very moving, raw, and real write.....i applaud your effort to help get yourself in order through writng........
Peace.

It is, after all, ourselves we must learn to trust.....our work, much like the cookies, is cut out for us......We Strive to be worthy of our own trust....a worthy pursuit.....and please cry all you want..washes and humbles the Soul.....a fine fresh start every time.....My heart goes out to you in your confusion over your friend......he Can still hear you...Tell him you forgive him..it will reduce his suffering...This is a very moving, raw, and real write.....i applaud your effort to help get yourself in order through writng........
Peace.

We are human.
We live.
We need.
We love.
We die.
We touch.
We see.
We feel.
We hurt.
We cry.

I like this part. Very heavy and emotionally well thought out. 5/5

I like this poems pain
check out mine if u want

Wow; intense.
I really like the amount of questioning you do.
You're a very debate-ish type person, I can tell.
nice job.
And thank you.
It means alot (A-L-O-TEEEEEEEE) to me.
*amanda
p.s. It really, really does.

I really like this poem its really sad
I'll give it a 5 really great you get through it