Beautiful poem.

It was beautiful. I'm very sorry for your loss. I like how you can put something so tragic into a poem, and then make it beautiful.

The only thing I'd say is, don't say 'you', as 'u', like you did here: "as you did when u found out."

Anyhow, good job.

Great pome very sad but seeing how well its done is good lol good job and thanks fr the comment

keenan