An exceptional poem I personally would put it in the love poems section but then I have my own issues in life lol. I really enjoyed the imagery in this piece and will be back to read more of your stuff.
Tim

Very well written. 5/5 sorry i have not much to say but I got a lot of more comments to do. => thank you very much for being one of them though!

God Bless,
Taylor

Very original write. I loved the ending. This was such a great read. I always wanted to write a poem similar to this but you have done it amazingly.
Keep your original ideas coming it is nice and refreshing to read.

Heh heh heh...

I must say, with no offense meant, that this stanza did make me laugh a little.

Hold me tight and wrap me up
Soothe my soul and cherish well
I know where we are headed
But at least it's warm in hell

Another wonderful piece of work. Another 5 of 5.

Kind Regards,
Luna

Good job! keep it up!