Comments : The Ballad of Lost Hopes

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    The vocabulary in this poem sorta through me off a bit I kinda got confused reading it hehe but that's just me

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Wow applause that was... I am spechless. The word choice just blew me away, the vocab, definalty enhanced this powerful write. the emtion was dark, and perhaps a little twisted, the rhyme only felt forced in a couple of places, perfectly penned, well 5/5 again