I really like it..and i like the way u entied God into it
great poemm!!!

Aww. sad. really worth a five alll the way. ^_^

Awwww. tht made me cry it was soo good. its so true aswel, well done, i love it! i rated 5, its so good i would have rated more!

AW,this poem made tears fill up in my eyes.
This is a great poem so much emotion i loved it the whole time i was readying congratulation with the poem!!
xoxroxyxox btw
No family to support her
No God in her life
No job to earn money
No man to be his wife(shouldnt it be no man to be her husband)

Excellent! I loved it! Keep up with the writing!!

~~Spanish

Omg i love this poem it was really great i made really think about life keep u the great work!!!!!!!!!

Hmm it's a good poem, but it's not my style though i like the word useage
it's good poem and i think u got alot more in you, keep up the good work ;)

Grtz from a Vampire

Very kool poem i love it solid gold

Your poem topic is touchy. The idea is good. I would probably suggest a bit more visual description of her and her condition, although you have done that. But keep writing! I would like to read more on this topic, if you can blossom more visualisation.
Kamal from Sydney

Love it! it sad but it has hope and a some what happy ending!
good job chick!
5 for you!

"There once was a poor girl
With dreams of a better life
Dreams of a God and family
Dreams of no strife".

-This one stood out the most. I don't know why, but it did. It's not my style of poetry, but like Vampire commented, there is strong word usage and there is an emotive atmosphere.
Well done and keep writing :).

-Elysium.x

I luv thz poem

That really sad.

This is so great i loved it

Umm its well written but i dont belive in god

Oh my god, I feel your poem so much, I don't really live in such a good neighborhood, so I kinda know what it's like. I like the whole poem, you didn't repeat yourself and it's straight to the point. Excellent, oh and I'm sorry I didn't answer your private message sooner. I didn't notice you sent me one.

Excellent! I loved it! Keep up with the writing!!
I really like it..and i like the way u entied God into it
great poemm!!!