Pretty good, i really liked it.

I like your style, great poem keep it up and thanx for commenting on my poem shanik

Thx 4 the comment....i loved this poem! the simplicity of it is great....good rhyme scheme, flows well
andi

Your an amazing writter and i really think some of your stuff is incredible this is one of my favourites its sad but its really good speak to u lata

Remember even tho it may feel as tho you are never alone :)) keep writing this is beautifull :))