Hey i really like this poem!!! it's cute but sad. It's full of emotions definatley a 5/5

Wow this is a beautiful poem.
it contains alot of emotion.
wonderfully written.
good job

sophie:)

p.s thanx 4 the comment , really appreciate it.

Hey amazing poem, well done. beautifully worded, and amazing rhyming and metre. well done, Great poem
Love Mel

This is so sad!! i love the first stanza, it's perfect! but i still like the rest of it... i like how you rhymed it and it flowed pretty well... great job!

5/5