Very well written and very deep. I really enjoyed this poem. Keep up the good work.5/5

I can see your point. But we are on earth for a reason, to do Gods work.
So please try to enjoy it.
Judith

Very well written, deep, I love it.

5/5

Tension builds up inside of me
I want a little room to breathe

so lovely poem... well written

5/5
cheers
Biya