Comments : A Phone Call Away {Cinquain}

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Nice poem i like how you write you poems in different ways, that's cool. keep it upi shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Awww.. Thats a nice one. In such a short poem you wrote alot. Nice job. =]

    Tammie xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Well done Nat, there was such an emotional drive to this poem. In sounded very subtle to me, but it could also be because I read it that way! Lol, excellent job sis!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Excellent write...

    "Cause you were only a phone call,
    Away."

    loved the ending... I havnt tried this form of poetry... bt still this one is simply beautiful...