I love it alucard!!

A powerfull piece and you explore emotive language very well. Well done =).

-Elysium.

You write with ease i can tell. keep it up and reach your potencial!5/5

Interesting, I wish I knew what it meant.... okay, I reread it. The passion in the words is obvious, even as it seems they circle about what you're trying to express. I dunno. good poem.

Ricardo my husband,
you might just be ment to fight with us.