Aww.. this was such a sweet and heartfelt write. You did an amazing job expressing your emotions on this. The flow and rhythm was very good and really held up well. 5/5 Keep it up!

[Now I pray every dingle day]
Should be "single" not "dingle" lol.

This was also good, but again the rhyming was a little bit simple. Try not to use the same words more than once unless you have to because that makes it a little boring. Other than that, nice job. Keep it up 4/5