Comments : She was his world

  • Awe. Very sad. I loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Chelsey dear, what a beautiful sad poem you potray here, these penned stop me for awhile, make me think, make me feel, with every stanza i read.....i won't say this is good, but this was greater than great ever i read...awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    What a horrible nightmare to have Chels, gave your bigga titta goosebumps all over. You know already how passionate I am about child abuse and angry it makes, even reading poems like yours brings me to a reality where children in our world suffer such abuse everyday - it makes me sick. Great poem however baby. Thank goodness its only a dream!!!