Comments : Mortal Divinity

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Awesome write!

    My fav lines were:
    Emptiness is just a phase
    The truth is on its way

    The imagery you create is so vivid, always a pleasurable read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bogie

    Dang!!! Dude, a most impressive read indeed.
    A very in-depth creatively penned view of
    how all matter is part of the whole living or not,
    and how man relates to one other in all walks
    of life in the same fight staying alive never
    giving up knowing there is hope as the end and
    the beginning lives eternal in the precious light.

    Excellent concept in a job well done and
    Write On,
    Bogie