Youv written heaps of gr8 poems and i really like this one, i would comment on ur other ones but i think youd get sick of reading my name! its incredible keep writtin im gonna keep reading your things!!!! xoxo

Wow i'm touched by this poem,seems it's you own life experiance but the person described here love her mother a lot well i wish i had a mother like that to love forever. i love this poem keep up the good work

It flowed wonderfully:)

Very touching read, the emotions and love portrayed in this, made the greif all the more harder to bear.

It brought tears to my eyes,
Keep it up,
5/5 Elaine.