OMG. Wow wow wow. This is sososo amazing...

My suggestions/corrections:
Her voice was soft when she speak.--- the i guess grammar and tenses of the words are off and it doesn't make much sense, and same with this line: She'd help when a child has fall.
She put her close on and was gone.--- close should be clothes
No protection was used for it.---I think it would sound betterif you had: FOR no protection was used for it.
Fantastic poem though! Love the story it portrays!

xxEvilAngelxx

So sad! But sad is good lol! I really like this poem. Good job and easy too interpret. Keep on writing. By the way, try not to always force rhymes. I know i do, but speek... lol. Use spoke and rhyme it with broke. Just a hint, not a necessity. 5/5 Gret work!

Wow this is so sad. And this girl does have a right to yell at the man for leaving them alone like that! 5/5