I can`t figure why someone rated this poem a 1, what were they thinking? I thought this poem described very well the wanting of someone,even though you have decided to wait. good job ,don`t let that rating get you down.

Ignore those down voters, they don't matter.

I liked this poem alot, and the free-form really suited the topic and added to the flowing of the overall poem. This is very well written. Good job.

Aken Sol

Wow, hun that was really good! The flow worked well, the choppy lines added effect, and you wrote it very nciely. The descriptions are filled with meaning and imagery. Great job 5/5

Pfft, why this is rated a 4.0 I do not know. I love the style you wrote this in, I have been trying to write one in fragmented sentences for wuite some time now and never have they come out so beautifully. You have a talent.

5/5

-Jenna.