WOW!!! That was GREAT! I Loved it, the story was sad, yet oh so very romantic....5/5!

Those summers ago,
I would have died,
One thousand more times
Just to feel your gentle breath
Caress my neck again

wow. those are such moving lines. wonderfully trajic and brilliant poem about love, reminds me of a few things i've written.

I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life!Congratulations,you have done a great work!Keep up the good job!Take good care of u!Best regrds,Michelle XxX