Comments : Where Am I? What Am I Doing?

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ This is nice +.+

  • 17 years ago

    by Robiie

    Sweetie this is good, i especially like the third verse, its very well put together, im always here for you sweetie i lovoe you x0x

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    OMG..all ur poems...are so..so relatable...simply superb.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    I can read this again n again n again,,,n it still wont be enough...GR8 JOB

  • 17 years ago

    by oldthings

    I really like the immagery in this poem, esspecialy the line

    "Crimson ribbons,
    painted along them ever so shamelessly,"

    it was a way of depiction i hadn't seen used before and i liked it. very good write, keep it up