Hey I like this poem. I think you did a great job on it. I'm impressed very nice. Please take a look at my poems and let me know what you think. Thank you.
Burning~Wings

Wow... this poem is feeled w lots of emotion. and written nicely.. i felt like i could understand what u were talkin about cuz u made me get the picture n my head... good job!
*lisha

I liked this poem i dnt no why u didnt!! lol its very emotional and i like the way u repeated "take a deep breath"
luv all ur work!!! 5/5
Luv FallenxFromxGrace

I like this poem very sad deep emotions loved it thanks for your comment on "Death angel"

Wow! i loved how much emotion this poem showed! its way good

You got grr3at skillss wh3n it com3s to writin good job k33p up da good woork

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