Good job!
This poem was nicely written!
Keep it up
=-)

(Check out any of mine if you like, i wanna know what people think)

I like this a lot

Wow, 5/5
keep it up
check my poems too if u want
:)
ShOrTiE

Hi thnx for commenting on my poems, i think your stuff is good but i reckon if you split your lines up more so they had a beat then they would read better. laura xxx

It shows so much emotion, so much emotion and just one cause, keep it up and be strong

Yeah man i like this!

This ones really good.
Sad and beautiful.
5/5

@lways,
Koriey

I love this one. so angry & so much hurt. it is such a good read. like tumbling head first down a hill- building speed. f-ing great, cy!

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