I could have sworn I commented on this yesterday....ahhh I'll just chalk it up to old age....lol

Why is a complex test
I do not want the answer to
I will be at my best
To do the things I do
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My absolute favorite stanza ! Bill you have taken this WHY ! challenge and ran with it .
Well done my friend, well done

Take care, Luanne

Bill... You really did succumb to this "why" challenge. I never really thought it would become a challenge as it did. So glad that you've written such a wonderful piece. I love it! Great work.

For those of you who have asked: I do not want to know why. I might not like the answer...

Hey Bill. I'm going to be honest with you, in the hope that you won't just attack my work, as crappy as it may be. I didn't really like it. I don't think this poem was strong enough, and I think it was missing rhythm. Sorry for the bad comment, I hate to do it, but I do feel I should say what I think, unlike most on the people on this site.

Brad