Comments : Living and Surviving (Tyburn )

  • 17 years ago

    by Timothy r

    O.k. I am jealous, I have been trying to write a tyburn for months..lol. You did it magnificently, as always. Tim

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I agree with Kristy..never heard of it..OMG it makes me giggle only because when I read the first three lines I was like where is this gunna go..the last two lines actually make sense....and you say your not smart..psshhhh you piece things together way better then I ever could! I love this style!!
    CHels

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    A form I've thought about trying for sometime, but not actually gotten down to doing it. A very impressive display of talent. You've used this form with elegance and perfection. Great stuff!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kim

    Wow I've never heard of this form before! It looks so challenging but you've mastered it perfectly! Amazing write!

  • 17 years ago

    by katie!

    I've actually had a mini english lesson today on your profile! I'm enjoying all these different forms of poetry you are using, I have to say you are pulling them all off incredibly well, brilliant work luanne, I enjoyed this, and I like this form, You have inspired me to try it out!

    Well done my friend,
    Katie
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