All i can say this was simply brilliant penned you potray here, flowed well yet good message, awesome!

A wonderfully direct message from a tough format....beautifully done my friend.

Luanne,

Three lines, simple, direct and full of TNT. Very powerful and true.

Warmest regards,

Steve

I love the Senryu. Yet again you've proved what a magnificent poet you are. Powerful, precise and damn right blunt. I very much liked this one! A truly realistic piece.

My dear Luanne,

What you say here is so true - it is we who make the choices, in simple ways and in complex ones. simple and powerful.

I also want to thank you from the very bottom of my heart for your encouraging comments on my poem. If there is one thing that makes me believe that things are going to be alright, it is the fact that we are not alone.

I'd like you to know that I am really moved and strengthened by your words.

Thank you my dear friend.

love and hugs
shobhana

Such a powerful poem to be only three lines

Short, but incredibly meaninful and to the point, I am amazed how well you put that across in just three lines, Well done Luanne, well done indeed.

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I love poems like this, it's the opposite to a haiku right? Same structure but about love instead of nature.
Hey, i could be wrong, but excellent work!
*Gem*