This poem was fantastic i found the ending a bit dissapointing but the flow was fantastic my fav line

'Who'll make me as happy as dad has made you'

this means you must be in such a happy family thisis great i havnt seen a poem quite like this before really its very good oyu should show your mum this xxx alex xxx (3)

The ending was a little bit of a let down..but i loved the flow and the rythmic stanzas you wrote. I could really feel that I knew what you were talking about in this, and in a way, I did...but GREAT JOB!
Keep up the great work...
oh and thanks for the comments on my poems...they really mean a lot.
Tristan Elizabeth

Gosh this is so emotional.
it expresses a lot.
i just simply love it =]

Aw this poem is so beautiful, a beauiful ode to true love and the splendour and wonder of great parents. Finding parents that are this strong and this in love and happy is so rare these days and is truly a wonderful gift to anyones life. Brilliant poem though, lovely theme and beautifully worded.

That really was a beautiful peice of work! I enjoyed reading it TWICE!

Wow! What a wonderful tribute to your parents! Loved this! I read it a couple times and shared with my son's girlfriend. Great Job!