Aww.. this is really sad and shows true emotions of care and friendship. I love the way that you wrote it and the flow and rhtyhm was very good and held up well. Great job on this. 5/5

This is really sad but i know the feeling...really. it's good...i like how you wrote it. pretty good flow...pretty good everything
good job

[You didn't replie, thought your new friends better]
Should be "reply"

This was good. Short and sweet would describe it. The emotion was clear and the wording was good. It flowed pretty well and the rhymes worked. Nice job 5/5