I could sense the anger behind the words here.
I found the flow all over the place, but it was a good read.
Keep writing, and you will improve.
And in answer to your question, no i'm not depressed, I am very happy, I just wrote that poem after seeing so much about child abuse on the news.
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I think that that was your best written one...hope that the drama stops for you ... guys arnt worth it .... trust me lol
Jennifer