This is a REALLY good poem..
I wouldn't change a thing...AMAZING!
Def. a 5/5!

Tristan Elizabeth

WOW. This poem was amazing! So powerful and heartfelt and sad. 5/5

Wow this was really good.. i liked it 5/5

Hey this is really amazing. It holds the reader to its very last word. Also, returning the favour. xoxleahxox

How sad! but beautifully written. good job. =]

WOOW! this poem is awsome ... amazing great job Andi..

and thank u for commentin on mine..
peace (¯`out´¯)