Wow, that was awsum!
Great work,
your a really good writter!
=-)
5/5

(check out any of mine if you want, i like to know what people think)

Wow... that is so intense, perfectly written :) I loved every line.

Wow.. that was such a dark and creepy poem.. and the last line absolutely blew me away. For some reason, it really stuck with me & I just loved it! Great job on this! 5/5