Haha Simon, what a lovely rhyming poem. A little disappointed you left CC&P, but at least I got to read your poems! A little surprised that this was rated a 3 :/ Ahh.. well, I just wanted to tell you, I missed you man! But we can still talk on MSN!

That was very very good I loved it

Another enchanting write Simon! I'll miss you and all your comments but at least I'll always be able to read your superb writing. Keep smiling keep writing! ^_^

SIE,
The ending stanza made my heart just say awwww, and I wanted to reach out and just give you a big hug.
Don't be blue darlin, she will be home soon, nestled comfortably in your loving arms.
A poem so easily read and understood and had such a deep impact on the heart of the reader!

Congrats on the " Reader's Choice Award " it is well deserved SIE !

You have a beautiful heart, that will soon feel whole again.
Take care SIE,
Luanne

Very excellent! I love this peice!
5/5 Really great discriptions and word play!

Simple poem showing every emotion you felt that time.Nice rhyming...

After reading many a poem from you Simon, it is your love poems I enjoy most. Timothy r

After reading many a poem from you Simon, it is your love poems I enjoy most. Timothy r

So simple but so powerful...WOW!!! I JUST FREAKING LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMN!!!!!!!! Look again...You've done it again!!! I LOVE IT!!! AWESOME WRITE SIMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!