I love this..

its like i can imagine it!!!

keep writing!!!

Wow! this is exelent! damn ur improving! great job!!!!!!

Another excellent poem Hun, very sad but written beautifully.. The imagery was amazing.. well done ;] xx

Really nice poem! I like the concept and imagery! Good work 5/5

Ooh i like it...

Awe wow. That one was quite the powerful one. I loves the image of a blackened red rose, it was beautiful. Great job hunn.

5/5

-Jenna.

That was great, I loved it, keep up the good work!!
Much Love
~*Danielle*~

You used symbolic colors well... i don't know if you ment them to be symbolic but every color mentioned brought me a little closer to the poem. well done.

the flow of the poem is well written. once again great work

-/2 Terra

Very sad poem...but very good.. i love it!

Amazing, just amazing. i love it i really do.