I do wish to know what this poem is about...maybe I missed it.

Tip: You use cliche rhyming. Harsh, I know, but your poems would be so much better if you got away from that. Please, don't take that personally.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Its so deep love it
could u comment my only poem at the moment sitting alone thnx
byee

5/5. IT discribed such an emotion that only the reader and you can really understand. Its amazing!

For a random poem it is pretty awesome! The reader can feel the emotion, The flow makes it nice to read, and overall it is an excellent poem! Great write Sammy!

Please r/r/c"the mirror" and if there is another that you have not read then feel free to do so!

Thanks,
-AnnMarie

The first line really hooked me, well the whole first stanza actually and I was interested to see what the poem was about. It was different in a good way to say the least. I always love reading new things with new topics. Excellent job overall and great flow well done 5/5

Wings as a symbol of innocence and hope, torn away when jaded by life here on earth. It sounds like you were feeling grieved by life and just wished to give in. ^-^ Great read, though. A poem is nothing but words on paper until the poet gives it a soul. Keep doing what you do!

Scarred for life and after it seems in this one. Very interesting. In a couple places the rhyming seems forced which throws the flow off a bit but overall you did a good job. Especially to be only 14. You'll overcome these minor flaws with experience. I still give you a 5/5.

Sounded like a sex poem at the end ((like him taken her purity and virgintiy))
but yeah it flowed weird in some spots but it was really good otherwise..
*~BloodScars~*