This was lovely thanks for sharing

I loved the first part of this poem but personally I feel you could have ended it succinctly with the line

But words can't express the words I feel

as for me the remaining lines seem a bit repetitive and superfluous. I don't mean to sound harsh but to me they spoil an otherwise great piece :)

This was very well written. The imagery and word usage that you had in here was brilliant. The only thing that I would suggest would be to break it down a bit to make it a little easier to read. But other than that I loved this poem. 5/5