Comments : Never leave me, Never depart

  • 17 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Wow i loved this, so beautiful. Just shows pure emotion and how great your love for him is. Great work :).

    5/5
    ~[AnotherDream]~

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    What a sweet, loving piece. My favorite part was when you made it very personal by adding his name, I think thats a great strategy in poetry for making it very sentimental and unique. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    This poem is amazing.
    It's really sweet.
    Keep up the good work!
    5/5

    ~Chelsea