Comments : Fallen from grace

  • 17 years ago

    by Slowly I Disappear

    Wow I really liked this, Its so true and I know what you mean 5/5 nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by KitKat

    Once again, this poem really touches my heart...
    Your a great poet, hope you know it. (sorry I couldn't resist) :)

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, really nice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brook

    This is cute in a sad way. I like it though. Nice rhyming. Sad topic thoughh..=] still 5/5. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    When I read the title I thought it was going to be about a person, so I was thrown off a bit when I read that it was from an angel's perspective. It made me want to know what she did to fall from grace, ya know?

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is a really good poem, the beginning really grabs you and makes you read the whole thing, The flow and meaning were great and the poem overall was excellent 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I've read a few poems on this subject before (a sad angel) so that wasn't all that new to me. I liked the first stanza, that was the best part of the poem. It was an emotional write, however, I feel the rhyming was predictable.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow this is such a good poem. it has alot of emotion into it. i love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought this was really sad.
    It was a joy to read, but the flow was off in a couple of places.
    Apart from that, you did a wonderful job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Danni

    I thought that it was good and it really captures the way an angel looks down on someone. Great work! 5/5
    ~Danni~