Comments : Holding On

  • 17 years ago

    by Joyo

    Ooh..so beautiful! I truly understand what you're writing. I went through kind of the same thing.. or maybe I'm not over it yet..whatever. back to your poem. It was very, how sould I say.. deep. and true. It was perfect! One more or one less word would maybe make it a little incomplete. I don't know, I just follow the feeling. And I thought it was prefect. good work! love//Joyo

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Okay. Let me get over the fact that you have a new poem!! DFHSDKLFSHDLFSD. YAY!!! Lol. Anywayssss...

    Mami this shiet was AMAZING!! No se ni que decir me encanto...dfadsfsdlf. I miss your stuff so muchhhh. and i miss youuuuu!! te quiero mucho!! And hurry up stop bein lazy or busy and post more poems!! please? lol

    Cuidate !!

    -Flaca

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Okay. Let me get over the fact that you have a new poem!! DFHSDKLFSHDLFSD. YAY!!! Lol. Anywayssss...

    Mami this shiet was AMAZING!! No se ni que decir me encanto...dfadsfsdlf. I miss your stuff so muchhhh. and i miss youuuuu!! te quiero mucho!! And hurry up stop bein lazy or busy and post more poems!! please? lol

    Cuidate !!

    -Flaca

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl vbeautifully worded. a very heartfelt piece well done =] xx

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautifully penned, so heartfelt yet flowed well with beautiful emotions, breathtaking!